Wikipedia:Peer review/Sundew/archive1

Sundew

In mid-April I began a major revamping of this article, largly through the translation of the German sundew article. I'd like to know of any ways in which this article could be improved, possibly for nomination of FA status in the future. Please ignore the red links which refer to species, these species pages are all coming sooner or later. Thanks! --NoahElhardt 15:40, 25 May 2006 (UTC)

• Please alphabetize the categories and interlanguage links.
  • Fixed.

• This article is a bit list-weighty; in other words, some of the lists should be converted to prose (paragraph form).
  • Does one list make an article list-weighty?

• Per WP:MOSNUM, at Units of measurement, numbers with SI units of measure should have conversions in US customary units and vice versa. These conversions should keep to similar values of precision. For example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth". Note that the converted unit of measure uses a standard abbreviation, while the source unit is spelled out in the text.
  • Fixed.

• Per WP:MOSNUM, there should be a no-break space -   between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
  • Fixed.

• Per WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
  • Fixed.

• There is a bit overwikication at certain parts; some words are linked and then linked again in the section: for example, m, Lamina (which by the way is a disambiguation page, could you please pipe it to the proper page?), Africa, Australia, etc.
  • Fixed.

• Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at WP:GTL.
  • Fixed. (Changed "Citations" to "Notes")

• Thanks, AndyZ _t 19:38, 25 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Thank-you for looking over the article! I corrected each problem as listed above. --NoahElhardt 20:43, 25 May 2006 (UTC)