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The Eleventh Hour (Doctor Who)[edit]

This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I am looking to promote it to FA. I have brought it to GA as part of a GT, and I have since expanded it.

Thanks, Glimmer721 talk 02:09, 11 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Glimmer, just some comments after a very brief visit. Hopefully I'll find time for a longer look later.
  • The images need alt text.
  • What makes blogspot (ref 25) a reliable source? (I haven't looked at it, perhaps it is, but it's likely someone will ask).
  • Why is the book second author Smith with a ? ?. BTW can I suggest the {{sfn}} template, or as I see only one use of the book perhaps just use {{cite book}} directly. Edgepedia (talk) 06:22, 12 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    • It literally has that on the cover and he's referred to as "RS?" throughout the book. [1] Just trying to stay true to it. Also, that's the template I was looking for! Glimmer721 talk 00:05, 13 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    • Also Ref 45 is incomplete (I don't know if it's a newspaper, book etc). Also there's syntax errors on refs 43, 47 and 52 (missing | characters) Edgepedia (talk) 06:27, 12 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
      • I'll try to get more info on Ref 45 (I assume it's an Austrailian thing?) and I fixed the syntax errors. Glimmer721 talk 00:05, 13 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Update: I've added the alt text and attempted to do the sfn template (there are actually two usages of the book) but I botched something and can't figure out what. Also, I've searched and can't locate a publication called The Wall of Lies that seems to be associated with ABC or Austrailia. I'm not sure what to do with that. Glimmer721 talk 01:05, 17 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]