Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 November 29

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I remember seeing a few profiles written in local papers about this person, but I can't find them online. Does this article meet the verifiability requirement as it stands? Also, the W in the surname of the person in the page name needs capitalising.

William.Marsden.2011 (talk) 00:24, 29 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, could someone please review this article on the novel State of Wonder by Ann Patchett? I'm mostly looking for corrections regarding formatting errors, and grammatical errors. Also, if there are any statements that need citation, let me know as well. Thanks.

Northerlywind (talk) 01:53, 29 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Michelle Lush (talk) 01:38, 30 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]