Wikipedia:WikiProject Australia/Peer review/James Killen

James Killen

The article on Sir James Killen is a long stub and needs attention. Sir James was notable in Australian politics and passed away recently. There are plenty of sources out there for someone who has the time and inclination to do some work on this article. Thanks Wikipeterproject 11:16, 20 January 2007 (UTC)

G1ggy

• References - This article currently has one, which is nowhere near enough. However, the news article used could probably provide more then the 2 references currently listed.
• Lead paragraph - Needs expansion, at least 2 paragraphs should be there.
• The political career section could be split into sub sections for different stages of his career.
• That section contains a good deal of proseline, which could be re-written.
• An infobox would be useful, as would an image.

Giggy _U^CP 04:22, 9 July 2007 (UTC)