Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/A-class review/William Wilberforce

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William Wilberforce[edit]

I have been working on this article for about the last year, originally with the intent that it should be completed during the year of the bicentenary of the Slave Trade Act, but it apppears that we’ve missed that. In February it was given a ‘B’ Class rating, but considerable improvements have been made since that. Any comments or suggestions would be welcome – I am still keen to get it up to scratch before the end of the year, if possible. – Agendum (talk) 18:27, 22 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Comment - article contains some one-sentence paragraphs, which are not really smiled upon. Also, there are a few paragraphs which don't have any specific citations. I read somewhere that FAs should have two or more citations per paragraph, but can't think of where right now. Those are the only real reservations I have, though. John Carter (talk) 14:37, 26 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Citation needed tags need clearing. DrKiernan (talk) 09:12, 6 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for these comments. Most done, as well as making changes as per other kind suggestions from various editors. Just working on the citations and other minor points now. – Agendum (talk) 21:39, 9 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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