- I can take the third review. --Rschen7754 11:54, 9 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Infobox
- Opened 1860s - source?
- Added a ref from the Convict-era road section - Evad37 [talk] 01:32, 12 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- The "Major settlements" wide label makes the second column too narrow on small screens. Is there anything that can be done about this?
- I had a look at the difference between "Major settlements" and just "Major", and there's really not much in it. On Windows 7, regardless of window size, Firefox showed no difference, and Chrome and IE only had a 12 pixel difference in width. Everything that is currently going onto two lines would still be on two lines. - Evad37 [talk] 01:32, 12 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- RJL
- The table seems unusually crowded and dense. For example, do we need "Traffic light controlled intersection"? Also, is it possible to use abbreviations for "State Route"?
- Removed "Traffic light controlled intersection" notes. There are no official or commonly used abbreviations, and Wikipedia shouldn't be inventing abbreviations, so we are stuck with the unabbreviated form. - Evad37 [talk] 01:32, 12 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Check capitalization in the notes section - subsequent clauses should not be capitalized
- Adjusted - Evad37 [talk] 01:32, 12 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Is "T Junction" a proper noun?
- Adjusted - Evad37 [talk] 01:32, 12 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Usually we don't cite Google Maps in the table unless we're using that for the mileages. Not a deal-breaker, but it might help make the table header less cluttered.
- Removed (but if verification of the column contents is requested later, I'll put it or another source back) - Evad37 [talk] 01:32, 12 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- References
- LATE CITY should be titlecased, at least, same with CITY FINAL. --Rschen7754 11:54, 9 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Changed - Evad37 [talk] 01:32, 12 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Apologies for the delay - my time for HWY is about to decrease significantly, but I'll try and get this done...
- Lead
- majority of National Highway 94 - link NH 94?
- Done - Evad37 [talk] 01:24, 17 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Route description
- Sections are Great Eastern Highway are - ?
- Fixed - Evad37 [talk] 01:24, 17 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- diamond interchange - should probably be linked
- Done - Evad37 [talk] 01:24, 17 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- which after 1.2 kilometres (0.75 mi), has a sharp 90 degree turn to the north - no comma after the measurement
- Done - Evad37 [talk] 01:24, 17 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- What is a shopping precinct?
- Changed to commercial area - Evad37 [talk] 01:24, 17 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- though it is commonly described as travelling "up Greenmount" - by who?
- The source (State Heritage Office "Greenmount Hill") doesn't specify, all it says is "Even today, the Great Eastern Highway, at present the main route to the Eastern States, is said to travel 'up Greenmount', even though the road runs north of the actual hill." - Evad37 [talk] 01:24, 17 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Along the way - comma
- Done - Evad37 [talk] 01:24, 17 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- What is a reverse curve?
- Wikilinked - Evad37 [talk] 01:24, 17 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- What is remnant vegetation?
- Remnant is wikt:remnant, clarified that vegetation is native vegetation, linked to native plant. - Evad37 [talk] 01:24, 17 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- History
- The use of "whilst" seems odd.
- Removed per point below - Evad37 [talk] 03:08, 17 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- That entire subsection seems a bit off; perhaps arranging the sentences in a different order might be helpful. I had to reread it a few times because the explanation came too far after the facts.
- Rearranged/copyedited - Evad37 [talk] 03:07, 17 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- having it gazetting - gazetted?
- Fixed - Evad37 [talk] 15:25, 17 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- principle -> principal
- Fixed - Evad37 [talk] 15:25, 17 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Check your nonbreaking spaces - should be between 44 and vehicles, for example, and $1.3 million.
- Done - Evad37 [talk] 15:25, 17 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Future
- long term -> long-term?
- Done - Evad37 [talk] 02:03, 17 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Environmental Protection Authority - link?
- Done - Evad37 [talk] 02:03, 17 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- What is a forward works program? --Rschen7754 05:42, 16 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Presumably scheduled future works. The news story uses the term without explaining it, and the only reference on Main Roads' website is in their annual reports' description of the executive team – "... His Directorate is responsible for contributing to the development, management and preparation of the budget and programming activities. This includes the annual budget and forward works program,..." - Evad37 [talk] 02:03, 17 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Review now completed. --Rschen7754 06:34, 17 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
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