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Order of battle of the Battle of Trenton[edit]

I'm trying to prep this article for WP:FLC. There are currently no land orders of battle listed at WP:FL; all of the existing ones are naval (thanks to User:Jackyd101's hard work). I'm looking mainly for feedback on content, what sort of content might be missing that would improve it. Other commentary is of course welcome. Thanks for your attention. Magic♪piano 17:59, 12 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

AustralianRupert[edit]

There's not much I could find to discuss about this. It looks quite good to me.

  • check the format that you use for numbers that are greater than 1,000. In some places you don't use a comma e.g. "5422" then later you do e.g. "2,322". These should be consistent;
  • the composition titles in the References section should be capitalised per Wikipedia:MOSCAPS#Composition titles;
  • the images could have alt text added to them;
  • according to the Featured article tool there is one disambig link that should be fixed: [1];
  • according to the citation error checker tool there are a number of citations that can be consolidated per WP:NAMEDREFS: i.e, Fischer p. 230, and Dwyer p. 244. — AustralianRupert (talk) 10:26, 21 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for your feedback, I've incorporated your observations. Magic♪piano 15:30, 8 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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