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SMS Erzherzog Franz Ferdinand[edit]

After seeing a post by Parsecboy on The Bushranger's talkpage, I was WP:BOLD and quickly expanded this and moved it to mainspace, later in the day, I found that PArsec had expanded it, and White Shadows, a person I had met through my interrest in U-boating, was telling me to nom it for a GA. It passed with only a few minor MOS probs. As we work on getting a GT out of that, I want to know what has to be done to get this to a: A-Class and b: FA-class. I'll be going back to the library on the 8th to return checked out books, so I could hunt for some refs there. I'd like to hear your opinions please. Buggie111 (talk) 02:00, 19 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

AustralianRupert[edit]

A couple of quick ones (sorry I'll try to come back for a better look, but it is 1 am here and I should go to sleep):

  • there is some inconsistency in style between Citation # 9 and 11. One uses "p. 151-152", while the other uses "pp. 332-3". Either change # 9 to "pp. 151-2" or # 11 to "pp. 332-333";
  • the Bibliography has an inconsistent format. Some of the titles have dates in brackets, and others don't. Albertini is the problematic ref. I suggest formatting it with {{cite book}} like the others;
  • the Vego ref in the Bibliography should have an endash for the date range (1904-14). — AustralianRupert (talk) 15:35, 22 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • All done. I'm going to nominate this for an A-class review, as no other reviews have been given. Buggie111 (talk) 01:02, 6 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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