Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/South Atlantic Medal

South Atlantic Medal[edit]

I've recently made some big edits to the article and would like to know what people think. Due to a lack of "Style Guide" from the "WikiProject Orders, Decorations, and Medals", I instead took inspiration from the Victoria Cross article. Ryan4314 (talk) 12:38, 30 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Kirill Lokshin[edit]

A good start, but there are still some areas that could use further work:

The lead is quite short, and could probably be expanded a bit.
There's no material about the creation and adoption of the medal.
I'd suggest moving both obverse and reverse images into the infobox.
In general, any additional information would be beneficial for an article this short.

Hope that helps! Kirill 23:11, 2 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]