Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/USS Princess Matoika (ID-2290)

USS Princess Matoika (ID-2290)

I would like to see what areas need to be worked on to get this promoted to A- and FA-class. I had an informal review by several editors at WikiProject Israel in regard to possible NPOV terminology for the American Palestine Line era, and I made some changes based on their suggestions.

Some questions I'd like to have addressed:

• Is the lead too long? If so, what can be done to shorten it?
• What are some alternatives for the really long infobox? One thought I'd explored was to have a separate box for each owner/operator, but I'm concerned how that would interfere with image placement throughout the article.

Many thanks in advance. — Bellhalla (talk) 23:21, 15 May 2008 (UTC)

TomStar81

• If I recall correctly the infobox sections can be made to collapse; I am not sure how to do this but MBK004 may know, so I would suggest asking him for help on the matter. TomStar81 (Talk) 01:55, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
  • That would be a great solution. I'll ask. — Bellhalla (talk) 02:26, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
    • I actually don't know if this is possible or not. The person to ask is TomTheHand (talk). He works with the infoboxes quite a bit developing new features for them. -MBK₀₀₄ 18:14, 18 May 2008 (UTC)