Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Brain Challenge

Brain Challenge[edit]

The article is more than just a Start class article now. JAF1970 (talk) 20:25, 12 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

dihydrogen monoxide[edit]

The image gallery shouldn't really be there...violates some fair use policy etc.
- Not really, no. These are not of the same platform - it's okay to show the different variations from platform to platform. (See some other older game articles.) JAF1970 (talk) 18:59, 22 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  - I've seen plenty of articles for games on numerous consoles (and have written some). It still violates numerous aspects of WP:NFCC to use those, especially as a fair use gallery. dihydrogen monoxide (H₂O) 07:47, 23 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
"The game is also structured like Big Brain Academy" - what is the "also" indicating?
- Was hoping someone would fill that one out. JAF1970 (talk) 18:59, 22 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The bolding in the Gameplay section isn't needed
- Um, why? JAF1970 (talk) 18:59, 22 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  - Because that's what WP:MOSBOLD says (or, rather, doesn't allow). dihydrogen monoxide (H₂O) 07:47, 23 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
No Game Rankings/Metacritic scores?
- That can be added. JAF1970 (talk) 18:59, 22 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
You could use more of your own words in Reception rather than just quoting everything
- Um, no. That's standard in the reception section. JAF1970 (talk) 18:59, 22 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
"game formula[4]," - refs should go after punctuation
"was more kind" --> "was more generous", perhaps?
Refs need publisher info, accessdate, etc. Try {{cite web}}
- Not for review citations. JAF1970 (talk) 18:59, 22 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  - Actually, all references should be formatted as well as possible. See WP:FOOTNOTE, amongst other things. dihydrogen monoxide (H₂O) 07:47, 23 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Hope this helps! dihydrogen monoxide (H₂O) 08:51, 17 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I'd just like to say that I would have appreciated some not-so-bitey comments. I mean, I don't have to review for you. Anyways, I've replied above. dihydrogen monoxide (H₂O) 07:47, 23 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]