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Neverwinter Nights 2: Storm of Zehir[edit]

Working towards getting the article ready for FAC. — Vantine84 (t – c) 06:18, 4 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Crimsonfox's Comments

  • DAB Link - Fix this
  • Ref 27 is dead
  • Refs 22 and 36 are inconsistent with their dates
  • Descriptive alt text is needed for the images
  • There's a couple of different styles of showing block quotes. I'm not sure about this, but I think they should be consistent. One uses {{Rquote}} and the other {{Quote box}}
  • Lead ideally needs expanding (WP:Lead)
  • "with new features introduced in the game" - "new" or "introduced" is redundant, they both imply the same thing
  • "The rest of the player's party can also be created," - "also" is redundant
  • Sort out any {{fact}} tags - One in the story section
  • Development - "high enough Survival skill " - Does "Survival" need capitalising?
  • Reception 3rd paragraph - There's 3 references which should be after punctuation
  • Reception - "a lukewarm reception." - Not sure about the use of "lukewarm". It wouldn't work if you said "hot reception" so I think it should be reworded.

I hope some of these comments help. I found this at the assessment page so I'll leave a comment there as well that I have reviewed it here. CrimsonFox talk 22:11, 30 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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