Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Pokémon Pinball: Ruby & Sapphire

Pokémon Pinball: Ruby & Sapphire[edit]

Cleaned up, need some final advice before a GA push. - The New Age Retro Hippie used Ruler! Now, he can figure out the length of things easily. 06:15, 6 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I passed this for GA, it might need some looking at for FAR, but for GA it's good. Sincerely Subzerosmokerain (talk) 21:17, 24 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Do you think that it could even make it to FAR? - The New Age Retro Hippie used Ruler! Now, he can figure out the length of things easily. 21:41, 24 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Well, one thing I notice that the article needs is the |alt= text parameter on the gameplay image, just to describe what is happening for people who can't load the image for whatever reason. I'm not sure how picky FAR would be on the brevity development section, maybe you should create an overview section and include Gameplay and development since the two sections are pretty closely related. And apparently, there is a new style for adding dates to articles (rather than ISO but as a written out style) but I've only seen this reflected in Mortal Kombat vs. DC Universe. Sincerely Subzerosmokerain (talk) 15:36, 25 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]