Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Warhawk (PlayStation 3 game)

Warhawk (PlayStation 3)[edit]

I have put this article in the requests for assessment, but I've watched the list not move for about a week it seems. I would like to just point out that it is not a stub anymore, and that it does have importance. It is a new game that is just recently coming out that a very large fan base and people are starting to ask questions about it. That is why I think we need to work on it. Playstationdude 01:20, 28 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

The assessment list is moving again. I'll get to it in a bit. User:Krator (t c) 19:53, 2 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Comments: Some suggestions to help get this up to GA. Its definitely got potential.
- Expand the lead to at least two paragraphs; include some info about the setting of the game and its reception.
- Cut down on the amount of game guide information; significantly reduce the info on the vehicles, turrets, aircraft weapons, and soldier weapons. Integrate the sections into the rest of the "Gameplay" section. The individual weapons should not be bolded either.
- Expand the "Development" section with some info about the actual development of the game. Why the developers did something, when and where was the game announced, stuff like that.
- Additional reliable sources never hurt an article.
- Minor detail, review scores don't need to be included in the paragraph when there's a table for them.
- This could definitely make it to GA if it's cleaned up and beefed up with more real-world content and references. (Guyinblack25 ^talk 22:38, 3 October 2007 (UTC))[reply]