Wikipedia talk:Today's featured article/November 12, 2008
Faulty parallelism[edit]
Not sure what the protocol for editing these things is, or I'd do it myself, but there's a faulty parallelism here: "Sakic has won the Stanley Cup twice, various NHL trophies, and has been voted into 13 NHL All-Star Games." I'm not quite sure how to fix it; maybe something like "Sakic has won two Stanley Cups and various other NHL trophies, and has been voted..."? Sarcasticidealist (talk) 18:40, 12 November 2008 (UTC)