Draft:Boram Care

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Declined by S0091 19 days ago. Last edited by S0091 19 days ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Comment: The draft does not fairly summarize what sources say about Boram, which is that is not affordable to most people along with other criticism. S0091 (talk) 20:15, 15 May 2024 (UTC)

Boram Care is a postpartum care company co-founded in 2022 by Boram Nam and Suk Park.^[1]^[2] The company operates the Boram Postnatal Retreat in New York City. The postnatal retreat is modeled after Korean sanhujori centers and Taiwanese confinement centers where mothers go for recovery from the hospital after giving birth.^[3]^[4] The postnatal retreat offers a nursery, lactation support and parenting classes for guests.^[5]

References[edit]

^ "About". Boram Postnatal Retreat - Postnatal and Postpartum Care. Retrieved 2024-05-15.
^ "There's a New Way for Moms in the U.S. to Recover After Childbirth". TIME. 2024-05-08. Retrieved 2024-05-15.
^ Krueger, Alyson (2022-06-01). "It Takes a Village to Care for a Baby. And, for a Lucky Few, a Luxury Hotel". The New York Times. ISSN 0362-4331. Retrieved 2024-05-15.
^ "Luxury Postnatal Retreat Draw Affluent Parents Around the US". www.bloomberg.com. Retrieved 2024-05-15.
^ "For $1,000 a night, new moms can live in luxury at NYC's postnatal retreat, where staff help detect postpartum depression". Fortune Well. Retrieved 2024-05-15.

[1] "About". Boram Postnatal Retreat - Postnatal and Postpartum Care. Retrieved 2024-05-15.

[2] "There's a New Way for Moms in the U.S. to Recover After Childbirth". TIME. 2024-05-08. Retrieved 2024-05-15.

[3] Krueger, Alyson (2022-06-01). "It Takes a Village to Care for a Baby. And, for a Lucky Few, a Luxury Hotel". The New York Times. ISSN 0362-4331. Retrieved 2024-05-15.

[4] "Luxury Postnatal Retreat Draw Affluent Parents Around the US". www.bloomberg.com. Retrieved 2024-05-15.

[5] "For $1,000 a night, new moms can live in luxury at NYC's postnatal retreat, where staff help detect postpartum depression". Fortune Well. Retrieved 2024-05-15.

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