Draft:Breathdeath

Breathdeath
Breathdeath
Directed by	Stan Vanderbeek
Edited by	Stan Vanderbeek
Music by	Jay Watt
Release date	1964
Running time	15 minutes
Country	United States
Language	English

Submission declined on 20 December 2023 by Macaddct1984 (talk).

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Declined by Macaddct1984 5 months ago. Last edited by Frietjes 5 months ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Breathdeath is an experimental short film by Stan Vanderbeek, released in 1964. Employing the collage-animation technique, the film comments on how life and death have been both influenced by mass media.^[1]

References[edit]

^ "Lightcone - Breathdeath". Retrieved 19 December 2023.

External links[edit]

Breath Death at IMDb

Category:1964 animated films Category:1964 films Category:Films directed by Stan Vanderbeek

Category:1960s English-language films

Category:1960s American films Category:1960s avant-garde and experimental films Category:American avant-garde and experimental films

[1] "Lightcone - Breathdeath". Retrieved 19 December 2023.

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