Draft:Todoroki Valley
Submission declined on 22 August 2024 by KylieTastic (talk).
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Comment: Read like tourist information not a neutral encyclopedic article KylieTastic (talk) 09:09, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
Todoroki Valley is a valley near Todoroki station in Setagaya. It is one of the best green spaces in tokyo as the you can find lots of wildlife. The valley has the Yazawa river running through it and eventually leading to the Tama river. Its a 20 minute walk from start to finish. Todoroki Valley is currently closed until 2025 due to the danger of falling trees.[1] It is one of the best nature walks in central tokyo.
Activities
[edit]In Todoroki Valley there are numerous activities such as Todoroki fudo, a Japanese Temple, which is popular among visitors. There are also lots of traditional sweets shops on the path that sell japanese sweets. There are lots of different types of birds and trees in the park which could bring lots enthusiasts.
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[edit]- ^ "Popular ravine trail in Tokyo remains closed since 2023 due to threat of falling trees". Mainichi Daily News. 2024-01-19. Retrieved 2024-06-10.
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