Draft talk:National Highway 167N (India)

Inquiry Regarding Potential Issues with National Highway 167N (India)[edit]

Hello Wikipedia community,

I hope this message finds you well. I am reaching out to inquire about the National Highway 167N (India) page. I am in the process of drafting and editing the content, and I would appreciate feedback from experienced editors to ensure that the article meets Wikipedia's guidelines and standards.

If there are any specific concerns, inaccuracies, or areas that need improvement, please feel free to share your insights. I am open to constructive feedback and eager to collaborate in order to enhance the quality of the article.

Thank you for your time and assistance.

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Mdsohaill123 Mdsohaill123 (talk) 08:53, 2 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mdsohaill123: it is a bit premature to publish this draft over to mainspace. Please work on expanding this draft some more.

The route description section is a single sentence that's a verbatim copy of a government document. For a highway that's 140 km in length, I'd expect to see more than just the termini listed in prose. Can we get a paragraph or two describing the progression of the highway from one terminus to the other? What is the surrounding landscape next to the highway like? We don't need a lot of detail, but give a reader a little idea of what someone would see driving this highway. Can those paragraphs list citations to a reliable source or two?

For additional expansion, we should have a history section. When was the highway built? Was the physical layout of the highway changed at all since initial construction? When was it designated as a national highway? We just need a few basics here to give a reader a sense of the history of the roadway.

At this point, the infobox has more information than the text of the article, and nothing has a direct citation to support it. That's not enough for an article. Imzadi 1979 → 07:29, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]