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Opener Issues

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The opening blurb sounds unnecessarily advertisement-like, or irrelevant, or something. Ehh, I'm not happy with it. I don't know the most important information to include in the opener RobotGoggles (talk) 23:47, 21 July 2020 (UTC)RobotGoggles[reply]