Talk:Étienne Hastrel de Rivedoux

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Article milestones
Date	Process	Result
June 24, 2010	Good article nominee	Listed

A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on May 26, 2010.

The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the Quebec-born Etienne Hastrel de Rivedoux helped to organize French military operations in the French Revolutionary Wars (1793–1801), the Napoleonic Wars (1805–1815), and the July Revolution (1830)?

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comments[edit]

searching for an image. Auntieruth55 (talk) 20:46, 18 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Étienne Hastrel de Rivedoux/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:03, 7 June 2010 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria[reply]

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality:
French placenames should be rendered in French, not translated. (Île de Ré, not Isle of Rhé) Watch your accents; I already added one to Grand Armée. Why is France italicized? Command, not manage.
should be good now.
Still need to fix Île de Ré, otherwise looks good.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:06, 16 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Ah, fixed. There was a redirect on the English spelling, so I didn't notice. auntieruth (talk) 21:30, 24 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

B. MoS compliance:
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources:

B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

C. No original research:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects:
Does anyone provide an explanation how he was able to serve both the Bourbons and Napoleon without penalty?
Not really. It sounds as if he was a very capable manager. And a lot of them made the transition from Napoleon to the Bourbons fairly seamlessly. Ney is one of the exceptions.

B. Focused:
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias:
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc:
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
No picture available?
Overall:
Pass or Fail: