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GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 22:38, 23 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Infobox

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Lead

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Paragraph 1

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  • "Released on April 7, 2009 in commemoration of the tenth anniversary of the band's song "I Can Only Imagine"." --> I would state "single" instead: "Released on April 7, 2009 in commemoration of the tenth anniversary of the band's single "I Can Only Imagine"."
  • "...as well as a re-recording of "I Can Only Imagine" featuring the London Sessions Orchestra and two other bonus tracks." --> "...as well as a re-recording of "I Can Only Imagine" featuring the London Sessions Orchestra, in addition to two other bonus tracks."

Paragraph 2

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Background

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  • Again: "10 was released to commemorate the tenth anniversary of MercyMe's song "I Can Only Imagine".[2]" --> "10 was released to commemorate the tenth anniversary of MercyMe's single "I Can Only Imagine".[2]"
  • "The band was initially against the idea - according to Millard, they felt it had always meant a band was near the end of their career." --> "The band was initially against the idea, and according to Millard, they felt it had always meant a band was near the end of their career."

Content

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Music

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  • "10 includes fifteen songs: twelve of the band's number-one singles[2]" --> Number one on what chart?
  • "Live versions of 10 of the band's songs were also included on some versions of the album.[6][7]" --> "Live versions of ten of the band's songs were also included on some versions of the album.[6][7]" (To be consistent since you spelt out the other numbers in the previous sentences.)

Video

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Release and commercial performance

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  • Good! :)

Critical reception

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Track listing

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Personnel

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End of GA Review:

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Great work again! Just some slight changes and fixes before passing. Please let me know if you need anything while doing this, I'd be glad to help! On hold for seven days! Good luck and thanks! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 02:46, 25 June 2016 (UTC).[reply]