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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 08:18, 14 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]


This article is in good shape. A few comments:

  • was a horsed cavalry division
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  • suggest "During the early stages of the German invasion of the Soviet Union during World War II, the latter suffered massive casualties."
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  • "meant that horsed cavalry divisions"
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  • "20 national cavalry divisions and 15 national rifle brigades"
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  • link Caucasus
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  • National Cavalry Divisions→national cavalry divisions
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  • 3,498-man-strong
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  • say that Uluses means districts
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  • "Since the command staff had departed the republic" why? to go to the front? concentration area?
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  • intro ASSR when you first mention Autonomous Soviet Socialist Republics
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  • say that a Selhozbank is an agriculture bank
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  • what rank was Onguldushev?
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  • link colonel
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  • link Mobilization
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  • section header Operation→Operations
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  • "the 110th Division was forwardeddeployed to Zimovniki, Rostov Oblast"
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  • "the Don river village of Kuteynovskaya"
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  • "After joining the 17th Cavalry Corps"
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  • "Case Blue, the 1942 German strategic summer offensive"
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  • "by sending forward the 51st Army"
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  • no redlink for the 115th Cavalry Division?
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  • on which flank of the 110th was the 115th Cavalry Division?
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  • "west of the Don, to cross the river"
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  • "shot down 5five German aircraft"
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  • "advance guard exchanged fire with the enemy, losing five killed and 7seven wounded"
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  • was the 273rd Cavalry Regiment a part of this division? What about the 311th Cavalry Regiment and 292nd Cavalry Regiment? Could you add info about the main constituent fighting units somewhere earlier?
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  • "The Germans retreated"
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  • reconnaissance platoon and link reconnaissance and platoon
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  • Panzergrenadier Division
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  • It was actually Motorised Infantry Division Großdeutschland at this stage, it didn't get upgraded to Panzergrenadier until May 1943
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  • 2nd and 3rd German Grenadier Battalions→II. and III. Grenadier Battalions of the Großdeutschland division
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  • link company (military unit)
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  • I. Grenadier Battalion
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  • anti-tank riflemen
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  • move link to Kalmyks to first mention
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  • located in the 110th Division's area
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  • 37th Army (Soviet Union) is duplinked
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  • Großdeutschland's motorcycle battalion
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  • link Armored car (military)
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  • link mortar (weapon)
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  • blew up the Bagaevskaya bridge
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  • 3rd Panzer Corps→III Panzer Corps
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  • once introduced as the 110th Separate Cavalry Division, you should refer to it as the 110th Separate Cavalry Division until it becomes the 110th Cavalry Division
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  • The divisional headquarters building was destroyed
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  • Manych river
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  • the claim for the German casualties caused by the division during Case Blue (destruction of all of the infantry and reconnaissance battalions of the Großdeutschland division, presumably) seems very high, and they weren't mechanised infantry (ie panzergrenadier), they were motorised at this point. Without German records to compare, this seems extraordinary. I would definitely attribute this in-text to Ubushaev and include who he is. ie historian etc. This is likely to be scrutinised to a greater extent at ACR or FA.
Added "according to Russian historian..". I actually mixed up mechanized with motorized, my bad. I will change it across the article.--Catlemur (talk) 14:47, 20 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "the vicinity of the Manych"
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  • rank for Vladimir Homutnikov? redlink?
Added rank. According to Russian WP Homutnikov was Frunze educated and led a secret Soviet mission to Tibet in the 1920s. So he stands out compared to the other commanders.--Catlemur (talk) 10:33, 20 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "mechanized infantry battalion and 10 tanks" from which division?
Source does not specify.--Catlemur (talk) 09:29, 21 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "the division was incorporated into the 4th Guards Cavalry Corps" but wasn't it already?
The columns located in the Northern Caucasus were, however those at Astrakhan became part of the 28th Army. When the division was reformed all of the divisions personnel came under the 4th Guards Cavalry Corps' control.--Catlemur (talk) 18:34, 20 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Dagestan Autonomous Soviet Socialist RepublicASSR
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  • Deputy Defense Narkom Efim Shadenko
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  • Sstaff of the 51st Army
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  • "collaborationist Kalmykian Cavalry Corps" and link collaborationism
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  • rank for Georgy Zhukov
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  • 110th Cavalry Division, were among the Kalmyks recalled from active service and deported to Siberia, many of whom died in special settlements
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  • ISSN for Bulletin of the Kalmyk Institute for Humanities of the Russian Academy of Sciences
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  • is there an identifier for Noviy Istoricheskiy Vestnik and Vestnik Kalmykskogo Universiteta?
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  • what makes don1942.ru reliable?
The website is managed by Zayarny and the information cited is confirmed by Ochirov (2017).--Catlemur (talk) 10:33, 20 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • File:Eastern Front 1942-05 to 1942-11.png needs some information about the source of the graphic info added to the underlying map
  • All this needs is a look at a book that covers Case Blue to check that the graphics are consistent, then note that in the Summary on the file page. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 05:48, 21 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Peacemaker67: Added a source. This should be the last one.--Catlemur (talk) 12:22, 21 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 09:24, 20 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by acceptably licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 02:24, 22 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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