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Todo

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Structure. Jdorje 02:11, 16 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

More detail...--Nilfanion (talk) 01:18, 22 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:1897 Atlantic hurricane season/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 18:51, 4 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I guess I'll review this since you reviewed mine :)

  • "The first system, Hurricane One," - since "Hurricane One" isn't really a name, I don't think you need to mention it here.
  • Why do you mention knots in the lede with regards to ACE?
  • You should mention H1's extratropical history lasting until September 10
  • You say that H1's rough seas capsized the ship in the lede, but don't mention it in the section. Why not?
  • "No impact was reported in the Florida Keys." - source?
  • New England impact for TS 3?
  • TS 4 caused some deaths per NHC
  • More info about the Triton here, including survivors. The captain apparently committed suicide when he heard the ship was sinking. Here is a list of news sources from October 1897 containing "Triton"
  • "The system weakened while crossing the island" - say Cuba here since it's a new paragraph

The writing is generally decent, but I think it's a little lacking on the comprehensive front. Fix these and I'll be happy to pass. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 18:51, 4 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]