Talk:1912 Giro d'Italia/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Zwerg Nase (talk · contribs) 11:11, 5 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I will review this. Zwerg Nase (talk) 11:11, 5 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Changes from...

"In response to the..." - in response to what?

Fixed. Disc Wheel (T + C) 05:15, 11 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

"...how the new points system operated"

Fixed. Disc Wheel (T + C) 05:15, 11 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

In the last sentence of this paragraph, change the tense into Conditional "would they know", also stage instead of state

Fixed. Disc Wheel (T + C) 05:15, 11 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Race overview

No need to repeat ref #7 three times over, the one at the end is enough.

I prefer to cite after each sentence for better recall when looking at the article after a long hiatus. Disc Wheel (T + C) 05:15, 11 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

And the end of the first paragraph: "...Carlo Galetti finishing third, ..."

Fixed. Disc Wheel (T + C) 05:15, 11 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Second paragraph: "By the time" - it is unclear what time is meant.

Fixed. Disc Wheel (T + C) 05:15, 11 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Fourth paragraph: "...start of the sixth stage at 6:40 local time".

Fixed. Disc Wheel (T + C) 05:15, 11 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

References

Note 1 should cite a source, right now, I cannot see where you take the information from which stages contained mountains. This should not be OR.

I took it from the Bike Race info source that mentions each mountain if there was one, I cited it in the table title instead. Disc Wheel (T + C) 05:15, 11 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I'll place the article on hold for 7 days. Good work so far! Zwerg Nase (talk) 21:53, 9 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed everything, this article was a pain to write, hardly any info out there. Disc Wheel (T + C) 05:16, 11 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Disc Wheel: Sorry, it completely went past me that you had taken care of this already. Passed now, good job! Zwerg Nase (talk) 15:27, 15 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]