Talk:1932 Freeport hurricane

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Date	Process	Result
October 14, 2012	Good article nominee	Listed

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 02:33, 14 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Per IRC, will do. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 02:33, 14 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

You link SSHS twice in the lead. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 02:43, 14 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Done - Corrected, second one just says "Category 4 hurricane." TheAustinMan^{(Talk·Works)} 02:55, 14 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"The precursor to the hurricane was first noted on August 12 as a tropical disturbance by several ships in the Gulf of Mexico.[1] " sounds weird I suggest changing that to "The Freeport hurricane was first noted by ships on August 12 as a tropical disturbances in the Gulf of Mexico.". Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 02:43, 14 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Done - Reworded. TheAustinMan^{(Talk·Works)} 02:55, 14 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"hurricane scale" should be capitalized. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 02:43, 14 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Done - Capitalized. TheAustinMan^{(Talk·Works)} 02:55, 14 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"Preparations and impact" should be re-titled to "Preparations, impact, and aftermath". Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 02:43, 14 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Done - Added, changed header. TheAustinMan^{(Talk·Works)} 02:55, 14 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"Communication lines in San Antonio were also damaged due to the storm.[4]" suggest re-writing it to "In addition, communication lines in San Antonio were damaged". Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 02:43, 14 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Done - Reworded. TheAustinMan^{(Talk·Works)} 02:55, 14 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"An estimated $2 million in damages from the storm were attributed to crop damage alone, especially rice and cotton.[11] The storm was estimated to have killed 40 people and caused $7.5 million in damage.[5]" year? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane

Done - Added a supplementary note. TheAustinMan^{(Talk·Works)} 02:55, 14 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Add the 1941 and 1949 Texas hurricane's to the see also. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 02:43, 14 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Done - Added. TheAustinMan^{(Talk·Works)} 02:55, 14 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Otherwise, it is good. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 02:43, 14 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Done - Done with all your comments. Thanks for the notes. TheAustinMan^{(Talk·Works)} 02:55, 14 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]