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Nominator: BennyOnTheLoose (talk · contribs) 21:48, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 20:44, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]


Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs)

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

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Prose

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Lede

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  • same venue; Conrad Stanbury qualified to join seven other players in the main tournament. - I feel like if you didn't know it was an eight person tournament this might be a bit confusing. Perhaps split into two sentences and spell it out. there was a qualification tournament... There was eight participants, seven who automatically qualified, with Conrad Stanbury winning the qualification tournament
  • I added something to support the numbers. As usual, there is no explanation in sources as to the rationale for who was placed in the main draw and who had the qualify. Even The Billiard Player has nothing else. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 01:32, 19 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 01:32, 19 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

General

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  • I think there needs to be at least a sentence or two mentioning how the event was played (i.e. a eight person knockout tournament, plus a five (well, four) person qualification tournament, and how people were seeded. Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 11:03, 16 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Review meta comments

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Thanks, Lee Vilenski. I don't have a lot of time available for editing at the moment, but should get to this in the next few dys. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 13:53, 17 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Lee Vilenski: I've replied above. Let me know if anything else is required. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 02:05, 19 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.