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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk19:21, 17 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

5x expanded by SamBroGaming (talk). Self-nominated at 02:52, 15 November 2022 (UTC).[reply]

General eligibility:

Policy compliance:

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: Yes
  • Interesting: Yes
  • Other problems: Yes
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: x5 expansion made on 11 November 2022‎, within timeframe. Earwig isn't picking up anything, nor do my spot-checks. No image, just checking boxes to keep the wikigods happy. QPQ not applicable. I was able to find the passage on a free version of the text, I recommend swapping out the source with this. I am not, however, finding the hook, or its associated information, anywhere in the article itself. Please add to the article before having DYK hook passed. No other issues noted. Etrius ( Us) 06:06, 15 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  • @Etriusus: Hello, I have made the requested changes to both the source used in the DYK nom, and have added the content to the article itself. Hopefully I have fulfilled all of the requirements now. Thanks, SamBroGaming (talk) 19:22, 16 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    • @SamBroGaming: Looks good, I made a minor grammatical edit and linked 'great earthquake'. Feel free to review the edit and let me know if you have an issue with my change. DYK hook is passed, congrats.

Can anyone find a picture shoeing the uplift

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see title 75.72.161.233 (talk) 13:30, 27 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


This review is transcluded from Talk:1957 Mongolia earthquake/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 13:06, 5 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Copyvio

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Earwig says good to go.

Prose

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  • Do the sources say whether the destroyed towns were in the same province? Asking because of they were then it would be helpful to readers to note this given that none of the towns appear to have Wikipedia entries.
  • That is okay than.
  • "Other large earthquakes had struck Mongolia in the past half century, including" – it may help some readers to give a criteria for 'large,' i.e. "Other earthquakes measuring over Mw 8.0 had struck Mongolia […]"
  • Both "December 4th, 1957" and "April 7th in 1958" need to be fixed per MOS:DATE.
  • The sentence "world's best preserved surface rupture of a great earthquake" has a by whom template that needs to be addressed.
  • "another large earthquake measuring M 6.8 event, located in the epicentral region." – sentence appears to be missing a word or two?
  • "Despite attaining the maximum value on the MMI scale" – as this is the scale's first mention in the body of the article, restate the value and add a non-abbreviated and wikilinked Modified Mercalli intensity scale.
  • "In the Bitüüt valley" – if known, I would add what province the valley is located in so that readers could be given more context to better understand its whereabouts.
  • Oh well.

Refs and notes

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The sources are all RS and cited appropriately—they support the article's content. Notes good.

  • I would add page numbers to the citations for the convenience of readers. This may take some time but I reckon it will really benefit the article.
  • Ref 3 needs more info, like ref 18.
  • @SamBroGaming: Sorry for not specifying—I meant a retrieval date.

Other

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See also good, relevant article and portals; External links good.

Infobox, templates (including coords), navs and cats good.

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.