Talk:1982 Benson & Hedges Cup final/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:13, 28 March 2020 (UTC)
Will review. MWright96 (talk) 18:13, 28 March 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead[edit]
- Wikilink toss to Toss (cricket) and man of the match to its respective article
- "to complete a dominating nine wicket victory with more than twenty overs remaining." - not so sure that the word "dominating" is appropriate on this encyclopedia
Background[edit]
- "Somerset came into the competition as holders," - wikilink Somerset to Somerset County Cricket Club on the first mention in the prose
- ESPNcricinfo needs a wikilink
Route to the final[edit]
- "and then made their Benson & Hedges Cup score," - am pretty certain the word "highest" is missing from this sentence
Summary[edit]
- Wikilink toss to Toss (cricket) and man of the match to its respective article
- "and after keeping Paul Todd on his back foot" - try to reword the text in bold to something more formal
- "Hassan was later caught behind playing a reckless shot off" - the word "reckless" sounds somewhat like sports journalism in this instance
- "neither consistently attacking of defending." - typo; should be spelled as or
Aftermath[edit]
- Eric Hill should be wikilinked to Eric Hill (cricketer)
- "by winning the 1987 NatWest Trophy and the 1989 Benson & Hedges Cup.[13][1]" - refs in numerical order please
References[edit]
- I believe Reference 3 is missing the chapter as has been done with the other uses of the Wisden sources
- Henry Blofeld in Reference 10 should be wikilinked and the same for Eric Hill in Reference 12
Those were the issues I found. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 09:49, 29 March 2020 (UTC)