Talk:1990–91 South-West Indian Ocean cyclone season/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 19:29, 6 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I will review this entry. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 19:29, 6 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

"There were seven named storms classified by the Météo-France office (MFR) on Réunion, as well as three depressions and an additional depression classified by the Joint Typhoon Warning Center (JTWC), an unofficial warning agency. " hold on, did the JTWC classify 1 extra TD's or 4? If former, add a "was" before "classified". Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 20:22, 6 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
" MFR utilized a High resolution picture transmission" lowercase h. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 20:22, 6 July 2014 (UTC)here[reply]
"There was also an El Niño event that shifted tropical cyclogenesis to the east.[4] " According to the CPC, there was no El Nino event. Look here, there was not even a trimonthly value of +0.5C. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 20:22, 6 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Could you merge the second paragraph of the SS somewhere? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 20:22, 6 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
"The Joint Typhoon Warning Center unofficially estimated winds " why is JTWC linked and spelled out? 20:22, 6 July 2014 (UTC)
Did Debra go ET before weakening? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 20:22, 6 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
" before assessing the storm as weakening." just simply say "before weakening". Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 20:22, 6 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
" where the Bureau of Meteorology estimated that Elma entered at tropical cyclone status.[18]" on what scale? Remeber, the AUS uses a diffrent one than MFR. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 20:22, 6 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
"On March 21, the MFR identified a tropical disturbance in the Australian region," how, if it was not within their AOR? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 20:22, 6 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
"Cyclone Odette in 1971 formed in July when the cyclone year ended on July 31.[25][1]" when did it end in 1991? This should be covered somewhere. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 20:22, 6 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Any other June systems since then? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 20:22, 6 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Above average, Hink. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane