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GA Review

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Reviewer: Anotherclown (talk · contribs) 10:41, 2 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]


Progression

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  • Version of the article when originally reviewed: [1]
  • Version of the article when review was closed: [2]

Technical review

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  • Citations: The Citation Check tool reveals no errors with reference consolidation (no action req'd).
  • Disambiguations: no dab links [3] (no action req'd).
  • Linkrot: external links check out [4] (no action req'd).
  • Alt text: images all have alt text [5] (no action req'd).
  • Copyright violations: The Earwig Tool reveals no issues with copyright violations or close paraphrasing [6] (no action req'd).
  • Duplicate links: no repeatlinks (no action req'd).

Criteria

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  • It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS):
    • Is there a missing word here: "...seized high ground on the south side of the Drava..."? Specifically should it be: "...seized the high ground on the south side of the Drava..."
    • "closing the ring around the remains of the 7th Army...", wonder if it would work better as "..closing the ring around the remnants of the 7th Army..."
  • It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
    • Article is well referenced with all major points cited to WP:RS.
    • No issues with OR that I could see.
  • It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
    • Most major points seem to be covered without unnecessary detail.
    • Any idea of casualties experienced by the 1st Army Group?
  • It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    a (fair representation): b (all significant views):
    • No issues I could see.
  • It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:
    • No issues here.
  • It contains images, where possible, to illustrate the topic.
    a (tagged and captioned): b (Is illustrated with appropriate images): c (non-free images have fair use rationales): d public domain pictures appropriately demonstrate why they are public domain:
    • Images all seem to be free / PD and have the req'd information / templates.
    • Captions seem ok.