Talk:1st Guards Breakthrough Artillery Division
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1st Guards Breakthrough Artillery Division has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: October 12, 2021. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:33, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
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- Lead is too brief, spending 75% of the time talking about alt names and nothing about the history or achievements or anything of the division.
- Where are the decorations referenced?
- "Anti-Tank (Tank Destroyer) " where they really called both or is this an explanatory note?
- "9 November in " worth reiterating the year.
- "received the Glukhov honorific on 31 August.[2]" what does this mean? The link is to a town in Ukraine.
- The "Offensive"s should all be "offensive"s.
- "Dresden.[5][4]" ref order.
- "It was assigned to the... " onwards is not referenced.
- "1942–May" etc, spaced en-dashes for all these kinds of ranges.
- Ref 7 is a bare URL, needs proper citation formatting to avoid linkrot.
- Ref 8 could use a language parameter and ideally a translation title.
- ISBNs could be consistently formatted.
That's it for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:00, 1 October 2021 (UTC)
- J-Man11 any response to this? The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 12:57, 6 October 2021 (UTC)
- Oh sorry, I had to run out of the house that day. I've fixed most of the issues. Some things you said were slightly confusing, but I did fix most. J-Man11 (talk) 13:16, 6 October 2021 (UTC)
- J-Man11 any response to this? The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 12:57, 6 October 2021 (UTC)
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