Talk:2006 Westchester County tornado/GA1

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Just a few comments here:

"The Westchester Tornado was an unusual F2 tornado that touched down in Rockland County, New York on July 12, 2006."
- Now, this could be different for storm related articles so feel free to ignore this, but generally we're supposed to avoid using adjectives like that in opening sentences.
While on the topic, after reading the article, I didn't find anything that backed up the statement that it was unusual. Perhaps you could add a sentence for those of us that know little about weather why it was unusual?

I made a few minor fixes. It looks very good. Once those issues are addressed, I'll pass it. -- Scorpion ⁰⁴²² 02:21, 3 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

The word has been removed. Passed. -- Scorpion ⁰⁴²² 03:22, 3 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]