Talk:2010 TUMS Fast Relief 500/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Adityavagarwal (talk · contribs) 08:11, 1 March 2019 (UTC)

Hey, this looks like a wonderfully written article. Kindly feel free to revert any changes/mistakes I make as I review this article!

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1. Is it well written?

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   B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:

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   C. It contains no original research:

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   B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):

4. Is it neutral?

   It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:

5. Is it stable?

   It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:

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   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

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7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

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• "during the 2010 NASCAR Sprint Cup Series season" season seems redundant here.

** Done . Kpgjhpjm  04:14, 28 April 2019 (UTC)

• Duplicate links should be removed per WP:Duplink. You could try this tool to remove such links in mere seconds!

Let me know if you need any help with removing duplinks! Adityavagarwal (talk) 20:22, 2 March 2019 (UTC)

• "brakes" need not be linked (WP:Overlinking).
  •  Done . Kpgjhpjm 04:14, 28 April 2019 (UTC)
• " Mark Martin finished second and Kevin Harvick, who started thirty-sixth, came third" As the team name for the winner is mentioned, it would be consistent to mention the team names for the second and third as well.
  •  Done . Kpgjhpjm 04:14, 28 April 2019 (UTC)

• "Tony Stewart with 5,666 points, was twenty-three points ahead of Carl Edwards and Greg Biffle with 5,618 points was twelve ahead of Kurt Busch, and fourteen in front of Jeff Burton" Here, although I am able to guess the positions of these drivers, it would still be better to mention them explicitly.
• Partially done . That makes the sentence lose its flow when reading . Kpgjhpjm 04:14, 28 April 2019 (UTC)

• "Three practice sessions were held before the Saturday race—one on Friday and two on Saturday." Are you able to find the dates?
  •  Not done That's redundant. No other articles have that. Kpgjhpjm 04:14, 28 April 2019 (UTC)

• "Bowyer, David Ragan, A. J. Allmendinger, Gordon, and Joey Logano rounded out the ten drivers who were quickest in the session" Is it in that order? If so, it would be better to mention that. Same here: "Burton, Jamie McMurray, Bobby Labonte, Ragan, and Johnson followed in the top ten"
  •  Done . Kpgjhpjm 04:14, 28 April 2019 (UTC)

• "forty-eight cars were entered but only forty-three was able because of NASCAR's qualifying procedure" This is unclear. Forty-three were able of what? Also, it would be better to mention the qualifying procedure.
  •  Done . Kpgjhpjm 04:14, 28 April 2019 (UTC)

• " time of 19.518" and "time of 19.799" units?
  •  Done . Kpgjhpjm 04:14, 28 April 2019 (UTC)

• "while Dennis Setzer withdrew from qualifying" Are you able to find out why he withdrew? If so, it would be better to mention the reason.
  •  Not done No sources found . Kpgjhpjm 04:14, 28 April 2019 (UTC)

Kpgjhpjm Let me know if there is any sort of help that you would need from me! Adityavagarwal (talk) 20:15, 30 March 2019 (UTC)

@Adityavagarwal: All your concerns have been addressed except the duplinks. Kpgjhpjm 04:14, 28 April 2019 (UTC)

Kpgjhpjm let me know if you would need help with the duplinks! Adityavagarwal (talk) 14:59, 10 May 2019 (UTC)

Adityavagarwal, you may want to conclude the review. --MrClog (talk) 19:09, 2 June 2019 (UTC)

MrClog The duplicate links issue was unsolved, which I have done now. Kpgjhpjm The article now looks really nice and good to go for a GA status. Adityavagarwal (talk) 06:20, 3 June 2019 (UTC)