Talk:2011 royal tour of Canada/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Edge3 (talk · contribs) 20:09, 9 January 2013 (UTC)

Hello! My review will come shortly. Edge3 (talk) 20:09, 9 January 2013 (UTC)

This article was peer reviewed on July 15, 2011. (See review.) Many of the suggestions provided by Ruhrfisch still apply today. The lead section should be expanded, and several statements remain unsourced. Before this article can be promoted to GA status, editors should attempt to resolve all of the issues that Ruhrfisch identified.

I have only a few extra suggestions of my own. The article currently has several images that are giving it a "cluttered" appearance. According to WP:IMAGELOCATION, you should "avoid sandwiching text between two images that face each other". Please limit the images in the article to only those that are most relevant, and keep the images within the appropriate sections. Please read WP:IMAGE RELEVANCE for further information.

Because there is still a lot of work to be done, I am failing this GA nomination. Edge3 (talk) 20:45, 9 January 2013 (UTC)