Talk:2012–13 Harvard Crimson men's basketball team/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 16:08, 21 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

" With scandal-reduced expections, the team entered the season expected to finish second in conference." cut out "scandal-reduced" and replace it with just simply "reduced", the old way just makes it a bit wordy IMO. YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane 16:08, 21 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Done.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:12, 22 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Mention its out of conference play in the lead. YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane 16:08, 21 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Is that enough?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:31, 22 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Mention that New Mexico was a #3 seed in the lead. YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane 16:08, 21 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Done.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:14, 22 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
In the roster, put a (R) for redshirt and note if any of them redshirted. YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane 16:08, 21 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- I am not sure what you are suggesting. The roster is template output. I can't make it change RS to (R).--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:16, 22 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"Brian DeStefano (Duke)" why do you link "Duke" twice? YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane 16:08, 21 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:19, 22 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
You should link to the cheating scandal article at the top of the preseason sectionin a further information thingy. YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane 16:08, 21 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Are you sure? This article seems way to short for anything to really need to be linked twice.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:26, 22 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"The team announced that senior Christian Webster and junior Laurent Rivard would serve as captain.[1] The team is only returning one starter from the prior year.[2] The team's two captains from the prior season, Keith Wright and Oliver McNally were seniors.[3][4] " you start three strait sentences with "The team", try to avoid that. YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane 16:08, 21 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:29, 22 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"Wright, the Crimson all-time leader in blocked shots, signed with Uppsala Basket of the Swedish Basketball League.[6] McNally, signed with the Moncton Miracles of the National Basketball League of Canada.[7] " Combine these two sentences. YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane 16:08, 21 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:31, 22 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Source for the game log? YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane 16:08, 21 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:42, 22 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Why do you link "Siyani Chambers on the second useage and not the first in the in-season award table? YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane 16:08, 21 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:33, 22 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Combine the two paragraphs in the All-Ivy section. YE ^Pacific^Hurricane 16:08, 21 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:35, 22 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]