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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]


Given I'm about to nominate a bunch of GAN's and we have some sort of backlog going, I'll knock this one out, given how shitty the 2016 WW is. YE Pacific Hurricane 00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

  • "The presence of deeper convection and an eye on conventional satellite showcased the storm's transition into a fully tropical cyclone and intensification into a hurricane by 06:00 UTC on January 14." link to eye (cyclone). Also ET storms have an eye and deep convection sometimes, so for starters, at least clarify the convection was near the center, a key feature for tropical cyclones. YE Pacific Hurricane 00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • " However, a strong burst of convection increased the winds to 50 mph (85 km/h). " a strong burst of convection doesn't automatically increase the winds. I'd re-word to " However, the NHC increased increased the winds to 50 mph (85 km/h) following a strong burst in Colin's convection. " YE Pacific Hurricane 00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • "On September 15, Météo-France began monitoring a cyclone in the Bay of Biscay that they claimed was subtropical, having apparently possessing an asymmetric wind field of tropical-storm force winds and a warm thermal core.[123][122]" order the refs numerically. YE Pacific Hurricane 00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • "There are conflicting views on the classification of this storm. Météo-France, which is the official French national meteorology service, released a statement on September 15 claiming that the system was a subtropical cyclone – meaning it had characteristics of a tropical and extratropical cyclone.[127][128][129]" you alreay mention this above so it's redundant. YE Pacific Hurricane 00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • "as proven by surface analysis data from NOAA, which showed that the cyclone still had an occluded front connected to it – signs that usually indicate an extratropical cyclone.[130]" we can't source images. YE Pacific Hurricane 00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Otherwise, it's good. YE Pacific Hurricane 00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]