Talk:2016 Marrakesh ePrix/GA1

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Reviewer: Bcschneider53 (talk · contribs) 00:31, 14 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

It's unbelievable an editor of your credentials has had to wait so long for a review. I'll take this on. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 00:31, 14 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Is there a more descriptive weather report than "sunny" that could be used for the infobox?
- The air and track track temperatures have been included. MWright96 (talk) 06:32, 14 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]
"The 33-lap race was won by e.Dams-Renault driver Sébastien Buemi who started from the seventh position." Comma between Buemi and who.
- Done MWright96 (talk) 06:32, 14 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

"Nelson Piquet Jr. felt it would a fast circuit" I assume you mean "would be"?
- Yes. Grammar change done MWright96 (talk) 06:32, 14 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

"The full course yellow was necessiated" Should "yellow" be changed to something like caution or safety car? Also, "necessitated".
- I have amended to say full course yellow flag; the series does not use the word caution. Done typo fix MWright96 (talk) 06:32, 14 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]
"The driver who recorded the fastest time was awarded three points towards both championships." I suggest rewriting this to "The driver and team who recorded the fastest time were awarded three points towards their respective championships."
- Reworded MWright96 (talk) 06:32, 14 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]
"the five drivers to qualify for the super pole round." Should "Super Pole" be capitalized as it is earlier in the section when it is first mentioned?
- Done MWright96 (talk) 06:32, 14 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

"saying both his vehicles were "amazing" and cars' balance was "really good"." An inline citation is required here for the quotes; I assume it is the "Driver Debrief" ref?
- Yes. Have now clarified. MWright96 (talk) 06:32, 14 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Are the italics necessary in the qualification table for the top five? I don't recall it being italicized in the previous Formula E article I reviewed...
- Italics have been removed MWright96 (talk) 06:32, 14 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]
So now it seems superpole is one word, with a linked article. If that's the case, link it on its first appearance and keep it as one word throughout.
- Done. Just of note, after checking, superpole is two words instead of one. MWright96 (talk) 06:32, 14 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]
If points scorers are in bold, Loïc Duval's 18th place row should be in bold as well.
- Done MWright96 (talk) 06:32, 14 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

As usual, simple fixes. Placing on hold. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 01:08, 14 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

- @Bcschneider53: Thank you for the review. All of the points raised have been actioned. MWright96 (talk) 06:32, 14 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

- Thank you for your quick responses. Pass for GA. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 11:40, 14 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]