Talk:2019 World Seniors Championship/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: BennyOnTheLoose (talk · contribs) 00:22, 1 September 2022 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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I've reviewed the 2018 AfD discussion that ended in no consensus. Looks like a major concern there was around WP:CRYSTAL, which should no longer be an issue; and around WP:RS. I'll bear this in mind whilst reviewing.

References are a bit of a mess:

• Billiards, World Professional; Association, Snooker - these need to be tidied up.
  • Done Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:43, 13 September 2022 (UTC)
• World Snooker and the WPBSA are distinct, but linked, organisations. Some of the references mention both.
• initadmin ?
  • Done Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:43, 13 September 2022 (UTC)
• Some refs are incomplete, e.g. "Mohammed Abdelkader to replace Wael Talaat at the 2019 WSS ROKiT World Championship"." doesn't specify a website or publisher.
• seniorsnooker.com doesn't seem to be a suitable source. Their about page says "It is not an official Seniors Tour site, it's a fan blog."
  • Poo, I legit thought the Seniors Tour just had a poop site Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:42, 13 September 2022 (UTC)
    • I've done my best to replace this - now it only cites one very uncontroversial claim.
      • It's a strange one, this. It's published by Jason Francis, the creator and promotor of Snooker Legends, so not sure why he refers to it in those terms. I think it's passable as an SPS for the one instance it's still used, given that it's a statement of straightforward facts rather than opinions. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 13:16, 14 September 2022 (UTC)

Images

• I think "alt=photo" could be improved. Image is CC, caption and placement OK.
  • Updated slightly Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:43, 13 September 2022 (UTC)
• Consider adding an image of White.

Overview

• "an amateur snooker tournament that first took place in 1991" - suggest deleting amateur, as the next sentence says that the "event consists of amateur and professional players" (1991 was a professional event, so perhaps mention that.)
• ", it was the 10th edition" - I suggest "and the 10th edition" (or a new sentence)
• "featured a 20 participants" - stray "a"
• "Fourteen players were invited to play at the event, eleven by the WPBSA and four by continental governing bodies" - not verified by source used. Also, 11+4=15.
• Probably helpful to readers to spell out what the EBSA, ABSF, CBSA and OBSF are.
  • Done all Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:43, 13 September 2022 (UTC)

Summary

• "White won the match in the next frame to complete a 5-3 victory and win" - could amend wording to avoid won/win
  • Done Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:43, 13 September 2022 (UTC)

Main draw

• Looks like some of the players should have flagathlete used, e.g. Abdelkader, Chen, Watson, Maas, Richards.
  • Updated Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:43, 13 September 2022 (UTC)
• What's the source for the referee and the frame scores in the final?
  • It's the same as the one for the draw. Click on the match and it shows you the results. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:43, 13 September 2022 (UTC)

Thanks, Lee Vilenski. Following the amendments, I'm happy that the article meets the GA criteria, so I'm passing it. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 13:16, 14 September 2022 (UTC)

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