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GA Review

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Reviewer: Cherrell410 (talk · contribs) 20:03, 19 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    see bottom
    b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
    All of the names in this article need to be wikilinked per MOS:UL
    Do you mean the names of the individual players? If so, then I disagree; I don't think the linked MOS page supports that (they'd all be redlinks and, while that's not necessarily a bad thing, I'm not convinced they'd all be notable enough to be turned blue). If there's any football-specific terms that need linking, let me know and I can do that (that falls under the "jergon/technical terms" clause of UL). PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 21:36, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
    Any names that are bluelinks should be linked. Cherrell410 (talk) 02:27, 22 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
    Done, added three links. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 02:45, 22 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
    @Cherrell410: Sorry, forgot a ping. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 02:45, 22 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
    "deadlocked" should be wikilinked
    Changed this to another word that more clearly describes what happened. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 21:36, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a. (reference section):
    b. (citations to reliable sources):
    c. (OR):
    d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
    8.7%!!!
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a. (major aspects):
    b. (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
    No media, but media are not required for GA status
    b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
    per above
  7. Overall:
    Pass/fail:
    Suggestions for improvements:
  • Lead: The inaugural fenway bowl, the game featured... --> As the inaugural fenway bowl, the game featured...
  • Background: unable to play their scheduled opponent, smu, was unable to find a replacement --> sentence should be split into 2
  • Teams#Cincinnati: set to join --> joined

(Criteria marked are unassessed)