Talk:2024 Sugar Bowl/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: PCN02WPS (talk · contribs) 03:44, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Alexeyevitch (talk · contribs) 22:38, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be reviewing this article using the template below. Alexeyevitch^(talk) 22:38, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I will continue reviewing later today. Alexeyevitch^(talk) 13:42, 18 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Rate	Attribute	Review Comment
1. Well-written:
	1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.	American English consistent throughout the article Prose is OK
	1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.	Washington's perfect conference record set up a rematch with Oregon in the Pac-12 Championship, where the Huskies again won by three points. Source does not mention the word "perfect". Clean up the links per MOS:OL As a reader from Christchurch, New Zealand with little knowledge about this topic, I'm satisfied with the lede and not much adjusting required here. The legnth is OK aswell.
2. Verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check:
	2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.	~~A substantial but not overwhelming TOC.~~
	2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).	References are OK. I haven't spotted anything 'suspicious'. All references could get an archived-URL. I suggest using the IABot Management tool. Please identify what page(s) the content is cited on
	2c. it contains no original research.	Analyzed the Background section. Source doesn't mention Caesars Superdome but I assume that it mentions its former name(s): Louisiana Superdome and formerly Mercedes-Benz Superdome. Analyzed the College Football Playoff section and needs attention on making sure the refrences support the content in the article. ~~Analyzed the Teams section~~ Analyzed most of the Washington section but was skeptical about this: It was their second CFP appearance, the first being a loss to No. 1 Alabama in the 2016 Peach Bowl and this Washington finished the regular season with an undefeated 12–0 record which included a three-point home win over No. 8 Oregon on October 14. ESPN mentions October 15. ~~Analyzed the Texas section.~~ ~~Analyzed the Aftermath section~~ Analyzed the Summary section but was skeptical about this: The pregame coin toss was won by Washington, who deferred their choice to the second half, thereby giving Texas possession of the ball to begin the game. It could be reworded to match content in the source.
	2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism.	Earwig spots something nothing of major concern. Content could be slightly reworded to avoid copyright issues.
3. Broad in its coverage:
	3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.	Y - No issues.
	3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
	4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.	Y - No visible POV issues.
	5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.	Y - No stability issues.
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
	6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.	Y - Suitable copyright statuses
	6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.	Y - Looks OK
	7. Overall assessment.