Talk:22 Pushup Challenge

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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment[edit]

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 22 January 2020 and 27 June 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Peer reviewers: Ju13serv, Stphjoey, Helloserenityhere.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 16:41, 17 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review[edit]

The article's lead accurately reflects the topic and does a good job at previewing the articles sections. While there is not much content, it is relevant to the topic and informative to the reader. It is also easy to understand and remains neutral. The article is well written and organized, however there could be additional sections beyond the initial success. Something that is more up to date and shows how the movement has done since its beginning. The sources of the article are relevant and provide good insight. Overall the article has a lot of potential to be more complete by adding sections and more content relevant to today. Ju13serv (talk) 05:52, 18 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review[edit]

This article has a great introduction. It was extremely clear and did an effective job at mentioning notable celebrities that capture the reader’s attention. The article also does a good job with maintaining a neutral tone. I think there can be more information added to further expand on the impact of the 22 Pushup Challenge. There is a section titled “Initial Success,” so it may be helpful to further go into detail regarding longterm success, critiques about the movement, and how prevalent the movement is currently. Readers may want to know more about other similar movements and how the 22 Pushup challenge has changed over the years. Since some notable celebrities were mentioned in the beginning, it may be helpful to include more information on those celebrities and go into detail about how viral those videos went, and what kind of impact celebrity endorsements had on this movement.