Talk:2 Hours Doing Nothing/GA1

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 19:51, 4 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Basic stuff and comments[edit]

 Done Chompy Ace 00:21, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 00:56, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 00:38, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done, source and reference have changed Chompy Ace 00:31, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • The following sentences need references (or need references moved to the end of the sentence):
  • "A viewer counted Didit blinking 362 times."
 Done Chompy Ace 00:47, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Didit originally planned for the video to be only 10 minutes long..."
 Done, removed partial sentences that are unneeded Chompy Ace 00:55, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Several Internet memes were published on Facebook and Instagram."
 Done sentence removed as unnecessary Chompy Ace 00:48, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "...with the number of downloads reaching 10,000 as of early August."
 Done, sentence within the Video game adaptation section has removed Chompy Ace 00:52, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • The following sentences need rephrasing (since they should all be in past-tense):
  • Change "is shot" to "was shot"
 Done Chompy Ace 00:32, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Change "the video is a sarcastic commentary" to "the video was a sarcastic commentary"
 Done Chompy Ace 00:34, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Change "video is only meant for" to "video was only meant for"
 Done Chompy Ace 00:35, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done, removed per WP:NOTDEFINING Chompy Ace 00:23, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Some Dude From North Carolina, may I ask why is the Adaptation section removed? It is significant to know that the video has been adapted to a game, and it is supported by a reliable source. GeraldWL 01:05, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Some Dude From North Carolina: Surprise! Chompy Ace 02:07, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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