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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 23:37, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 23:37, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  • Last three sentences of the lead all begin with "The station". Maybe change it to some other phrase?
  •  Done
  • "The station was also renovated in 1970." Renovated in which way?
  • Ref 8 doesn't say that the approval was from Appellate Division of the Supreme Court of New York, unless I missed something.
    • minus Removed
  • Ref 9 needs page numbers.
    •  Done
  • Ref 10 needs |via=Newspapers.com.
  • Preferably clipped if possible.
  • Same for Ref 3.
  • And Refs 34 and 35.
  • "490 feet (150 m) to 530 feet (160 m)" Ref 12 says 495.
    •  Done
  • Ref 13 needs |subscription=yes.
    •  Done
  • Ref 15 needs date format fixed.
    •  Done
  • "in preparation of the construction of platform extensions" This should belong at the end of the sentence.
    •  Done
  • "8-by-16-inch (200 by 410 mm)" Would centimeters be a better choice?
    •  Done
  • Shouldn't the 1970 renovation belong in the same section as the other renovations?
  • I would put the reference for each service right next to the service mentioned (after the punctuation), instead of putting all of them at the end of the sentence.
  • Ref 29 needs date format fixed.
    •  Done

Mostly just references. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 04:39, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

FYI, I am aware of that epicgenius will be fixing parts of the article while you're still observing Passover, Kew Gardens 613Nova Crystallis (Talk) 04:53, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Nova Crystallis: I am available again so I can address any other outstanding issues. Thanks for taking this up.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 23:35, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]