Talk:4: The Remix/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Tomica (talk · contribs) 21:18, 24 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

End of Time redirects to The End of Time and Switch (DJ) to DJ Switch (however for the last I guess he is the same). — Tomica (talk) 17:15, 25 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
No dead links. That's good. — Tomica (talk) 17:15, 25 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Are you sure that all the songs were recorded in the period 2011-12? The 4 article says recording took place from 2009-2011? — Tomica (talk) 17:15, 25 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Why don't you add the producers in the infobox, instead of saying various? — Tomica (talk) 17:15, 25 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Prior to the release of the album ---> Is a extended play really an album? — Tomica (talk) 17:15, 25 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Rest is fine.— Tomica (talk) 17:15, 25 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The contest, which was opened to entrants in 25 countries ---> Maybe you can name some of the countries? — Tomica (talk) 17:15, 25 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Also with naming some countries, you can split the big sentence in 2 sentences? — Tomica (talk) 17:15, 25 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Maybe you can tell from which country was the winner? — Tomica (talk) 17:15, 25 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"The beat is great and I feel this mix would definitely get people moving in a club. It's got just enough attitude to get Beyonce fans moving." ---> I really think you can paraprase this ;) ! — Tomica (talk) 17:15, 25 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
the EP appeared ---> The EP debuted. — Tomica (talk) 17:15, 25 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Why don't you use this format? In that way you can also show which is the original producer. — Tomica (talk) 21:26, 27 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Link Billboard only first time. — Tomica (talk) 21:26, 27 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
35. The publisher should also contain UK Singles Chart — Tomica (talk) 21:26, 27 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

All in all, a very good written article. You can start resolving the issues now. — Tomica (talk) 21:26, 27 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Everything

Done. My love is love (talk) 09:42, 28 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

All in all

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail: