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I have completed the B class checklist and feel that this article could be improved by addressing the following issues:

  • Referencing: there are almost enough in line citations, however, for a B class every paragraph must have at least one in line citation, as well as every assertion that might be challenged or seems controversial, etc.;
  • Coverage: I am not an expert on this topic, however, I believe that the coverage of this article is not up to B class standard simply due to the fact that it does not have much detail. For example, the history section does not provide a date of when the unit was formed, nor does it discuss anyting after 1952, except for a brief section on the current status of the unit. Surely something happened between 1952 and 2008?
  • Supporting materials: an infobox and or some pictures would serve to illustrate the article.

Just a few ideas. Once these have been added, you might like to seek re-assessment. This can be done by placing the article's name in the appropriate section on WP:MHA. Hope this helps. AustralianRupert (talk) 06:16, 9 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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During several automated bot runs the following external link was found to be unavailable. Please check if the link is in fact down and fix or remove it in that case!

--JeffGBot (talk) 07:00, 19 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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During several automated bot runs the following external link was found to be unavailable. Please check if the link is in fact down and fix or remove it in that case!

  • http://www.kimsoft.com/2000/peng.htm
    • In 112th Division (People's Republic of China) on 2011-05-23 02:12:49, Socket Error: 'A connection attempt failed because the connected party did not properly respond after a period of time, or established connection failed because connected host has failed to respond'
    • In 112th Division (People's Republic of China) on 2011-06-01 02:17:48, Socket Error: 'A connection attempt failed because the connected party did not properly respond after a period of time, or established connection failed because connected host has failed to respond'
    • In 38th Army (People's Republic of China) on 2011-06-19 07:00:10, Socket Error: 'A connection attempt failed because the connected party did not properly respond after a period of time, or established connection failed because connected host has failed to respond'

--JeffGBot (talk) 07:01, 19 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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