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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:31, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • Is the " 86 Street" in the infobox on purpose, i.e. not "86th" but "86"?
  • "Division A (IRT)" is mentioned in the infobox but this doesn't appear in the article?
  • "legal challenges" what were the nature of these?
    •  Fixed
  • "[6]:186[3]" order.
    •  Fixed
  • "the initial system" do you mean the first 28 stations? I'm not sure what "initial system" is here.
  • "$13,719,643" too accurate!
    •  Fixed
  • Be consistent and inflate all figures, to the same degree of accuracy.
    •  Done
  • "new entrance did not have an entrance kiosk." repetitive.
    •  Fixed
  • You have NYCTA abbreviated but not used in the prose.
    • minus Removed
  • "the 3 train at all times" overlinked.
    • minus Removed
  • "terra-cotta" hyphenated?
    • minus Removed
  • You have two captions mentioning cartouches but no mention of cartouches in the prose.
    •  Fixed
  • What's FDNY?
    •  Fixed
  • "kids at play" ->"children at play"?
    •  Done
  • Ref 32 and one ext link: spaced hyphen should be en-dash.
    •  Fixed
  • Refs 38, 39 no SHOUTING please.
    •  Fixed
  • 10 external links seems a little excessive, surely if there's really good and important stuff in there which aren't pictures, it could be included in the article?

That's all I have, on hold for now. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:23, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Thanks for the comments, and as always, good points. I've fixed some and am now fixing the rest, as the other issues are also spread across other articles. Epicgenius (talk) 17:14, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@The Rambling Man: I've fixed all of these now. These were all fairly minor issues. Epicgenius (talk) 18:37, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, all good here so promoting. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 07:27, 19 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.