Talk:A Little Bit/GA1
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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 10:08, 17 January 2011 (UTC)
- No dab links or dead ELs
Background and composition
[edit]- "A Little Bit" lasts for three minutes and forty-seven seconds. – is this really needed? If it is, reword to remove "lasts for" - colloquialish
Done
- The sheet music analysis needs attribution ie 'According to blah..
Done
Reception
[edit]- "But, Chuck Campbell..." 'but' → however
Done
- Are there any more reviews? Look through all the reviews from the album on Metacritic
- Album is not present in Metacritic. I searched everywhere.
- "The song debuted at number sixty-two in Australia" - on what?
Done On ARIA Charts.
Music video
[edit]- A lot of this section is "The music video..." "the video..." Vary it a bit. Merge the two paragraphs.
Done
- The synopsis needs a decent copy-edit in terms of prose quality
- I'll ask someone to copy-edit.
Done
- "The video reached number seven on Total Request Live countdown." the Total Request Live countdown?
Done
Live performances and cover version
[edit]- "She wore a white top and plaid pants for the performance. She also put on a red hat, and a red tie" - merge
Done
- You mention the poles twice
Done Removed the duplicate.
- The cover should have its own level two section at the bottom of the article (just before refs), and needs expansion - particularly with reception
- I have very few information on the cover. Will try to find out more.
Done
Credits and personnel
[edit]- More wikifying, please
Done
Summary
[edit]A good start, but a way to go. On hold, awaiting improvements. Adabow (talk · contribs) 10:20, 17 January 2011 (UTC)
Further comments
[edit]- Link music video
Done
- Source the concert synopsis
Done
- The cover needs expansion, its own infobox, etc. as it was a single. See When You Believe and Love Don't Live Here Anymore for examples. It should be at the very end, after Simpson's track listing/charts.
Done
- Trim File:ALittleBitSample.ogg to 22.7 seconds
Done
- Because there is not much in the way of chartings, expand the current info to include the number of weeks etc.
Done
Adabow (talk · contribs) 20:55, 17 January 2011 (UTC)
- I would suggest removing the two chart position tables as they give no new information and are a bit confusing. The cover needs more info, particularly critical reception, and also needs some basic info like release date/other info and director of video. Adabow (talk · contribs) 22:29, 18 January 2011 (UTC)
- Removed the tables. Novice7 | Talk 03:49, 19 January 2011 (UTC)
- Added a review. But, couldn't find the director. Novice7 | Talk 11:27, 19 January 2011 (UTC)
- The release date/label needs a reference, then I think we'll be done. Adabow (talk · contribs) 22:08, 19 January 2011 (UTC)
- Added (allmusic). Novice7 | Talk 03:33, 20 January 2011 (UTC)
- OK, passing now. Adabow (talk · contribs) 07:49, 20 January 2011 (UTC)
- Added (allmusic). Novice7 | Talk 03:33, 20 January 2011 (UTC)