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Nice work on the article! I will add my comments and questions below.

  • What's hyperspace? (Maybe there's a Wikipedia article you can link to).
    • Hyperspace is a form of faster than light travel on most ships on the show, added link to Faster-than-light.
  • Internet should be spelled with a capital "i".
  • is forced to take command of the city Atlantis
  • Explain what M12-578 is.
    • Not sure if I should explain this in too much detail on the article, long story short, it is their new destination after fleeing their previous planet; in the Stargate universe, unnamed planets are often designated Pxx-xxx in SG-1, or Mxx-xxx in Atlantis.
  • In space suits Sheppard and Zelenka – Insert a comma after "space suits".
  • Weir, having apparently fully recovered regains consciousness. – comma after "recovered"
  • Spell out "wouldn't"
  • on all ten seasons of sister series – plural
  • decreased viewership by 6 six percent from the avaerage average ratings
  • unlink 2008
  • also nominated for the 6th sixth annual

I will put the article on hold for seven days so that you can fix this. Good luck! :) TheLeftorium 16:08, 23 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review, I have addressed the concerns and even replied on the odd comment, let me know if there's more. -- Matthew R Dunn (talk) 16:52, 23 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Nice job! The article meets the criteria now so I will pass it. :) TheLeftorium 17:07, 23 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]