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Reviewer: Dunkleosteus77 (talk · contribs) 00:34, 25 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Dunkleosteus77

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– I was thinking of things like dandilion seeds and ballooning spiders
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hit ctrl+F and type in " and " with the spaces to find all the places you may have missed Dunkleosteus77 (talk) 21:27, 4 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
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– changed to "temporary or intermittant water"
– changed to: "to several hundred meters, and up to several thousand meters"
why not "hundreds of thousands of meters"? Dunkleosteus77 (talk) 05:29, 1 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
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  • " Freshwater organisms that must 'cross the dry ocean' to enter new aquatic island systems will be passively dispersed more successfully than terrestrial taxa.[6] However, numerous taxa from both soil and freshwater systems have been captured from the air" I don't get how these 2 statements contradict each other Dunkleosteus77 (talk) 00:34, 25 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
– the unnecessary "however" has disappeared
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– it's talking about how old fossilised pollen can be. Still, I removed the comment.
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– the source given is a review which discusses three further sources for thunderstorm asthma, refs 72–74
– working on adding a section to address this
it'd be better if it was discussed where relevant, like the ecological benefits of fungus dispersal in the Fungal spores section Dunkleosteus77 (talk) 21:27, 4 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
– The Microbiome section deals briefly with the ecology of aeroplankton. I can't find anything particularly significant in aeroplankton research which uses a tradition approach to ecology. Rather environmental airplankton samples are rapidly analyzed by high-throughput sequencing, an approach which sits well with the microbiome framework.
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– but don't ferns produce spores rather than pollen? [1][2]
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@Dunkleosteus77: Thank you! I'm now starting to work through the issues. — Epipelagic (talk) 04:52, 27 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I'll try to pick up tomorrow or day after Dunkleosteus77 (talk) 05:29, 1 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Dunkleosteus77: are there any further issues to address? - — Epipelagic (talk) 19:00, 4 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
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